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I need help from you guys. You see, for the story I'm making to be good enough to read I want to make sure that the colors and letter spacing and stuff arent wrong. So i'm uploading this test page for you guys to point out anything I haven't seen or can use help with. Don't mind the grammar please lol...

The things I actually want an answer to are:

- Is the color of the text hurtfull to the eyes when reading?
- Is the text easy to read or is it to crowded? (needs more spacing?)
- What do you think of the black background color?

If you see nothing wrong and you read it without any problems then please let me know. I can't give anything back so far, but it will benefit the larger story I am working on. so it's technically a win-win situation?

BTW: this image is about 1/3 of the normal size. it's not pdf, if it was then it would be easier to zoom in and stuff (easier to read for everybody).

greetings Lerra
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